Personally I really don't like the start where your moving they pictures up and down, it feels almost lazy in a way, you could just turn they pages instead of something that is kind of disorientating. If it were me, I'd just take photos of each page and add a very slow zoom in on each one as your talking about them.

The second half is better but I would recommend maybe playing about with different backgrounds (as in behind they drawings) such as the grayscale like colours that animatics are normally done in, maybe even they paper texture a lot of stick figure animation sometimes use.

As for your drawing style, it's clear that your ahh... not they best; but your a lot better on paper than digitally, maybe for they backgrounds of the second half you could draw them on paper first and then take a picture of them and draw over them (although if your using a mouse to draw you will need to just slow down your movements in order to get more smoother lines.

You have clearly spent a lot of time and hard work on this.
Nice work, keep making more stuff please ;)

At the 32 second mark when it cuts to the next scene; the first person to speak sounds like
they are getting cut off at the start of "Hello".

The well at the 40 second mark looks more like a trampoline. Maybe you could of had a circle of water in the middle to represent the depth of it.

It felt kind of odd that the yellow guy never looked froward even at the 1:25 mark when there was someone walking in front of him. You have a looking froward pose already drawn for him in your first episode.

Also why have chairs if no ever sits down? (The yellow guy looks like he's floating and not sitting).

Overall: The voice acting isn't the worst, and I like the way your writing dark comedy and your not using swear words just for the sake of using them.

It takes a lot of time to make a 3 minute animation that has a story, uses jokes and has a beginning, middle and end that lend off each other.

Nice job and keep up the good work!

Awesome animation but you mention sound effects but there isn't any? did you have to remove them to upload it or something?

It clearly shows there has been a lot of work put in to this and it's just amazing to watch!

Good job to you and 1BN for this almost 800 frames of pure madness!

I want more levels!!! (:

I tried it for a minute and found it fun (though the music restarting made it annoying to play for longer.)
I think I found a glitch but I only had it the one time in 29 attempts,
After going up the first ramp I went left in the air and I think I hit the roof and it said for a second "you won" then placed me back to the start as if I died.
Hope it helps,
keep up the good work ;)